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is this powerpoint worthy of turning in?

Well you have a lot of spelling and grammar errors to correct. What kind of class is this for? Also you may want to tell more about your hopes and dreams, or perhaps if you have any spiritual beliefs, or talk about what makes you a good friend. Good luck.
 
As danaj has already pointed out, the spelling and grammar needs to be corrected before turning it in. Is this for school? Also the first slide is showing a "Codec Unavailable" error, presumably it's trying to play music or other media. Is music needed for your presentation? Viewed with MS Office 2010 Pro on Win 7.
 
its a poerpoint about who i am but like could it be worded better or slides rearranged?!? let me know!


Well Cameron I find it admirable that at such a young age you are interested in the Information / Computer Industry and not afraid to show the world how you feel and who you are! :)

Very good qualities to have.

I wish I was more open like that at your age.

You are about 15 / 16 and at your age I was very undisciplined and couldn't care less about work.

Pretty sad,

Anywayz

Is this for school as a project or something along those lines?

Maybe you can add things like the others said, like religious views, what you believe in.

Like do you believe there is a God?

Why?

Do you like art?

Why?

What music do you like and give some reasons, maybe you can add that too.

Basically likes and dislikes you can add too.

What about your personality?

Are you out going?

You will need to work on some grammar though and some minor spelling mistakes.

If you are very interested in computers then I recommend you have a look at W3Schools Online Web Tutorials to start out for some programming skills.

Do not feel down if it seems you are not going as fast as you first thought with programming.

You will need some patience and perseverance / dedication to go about programming.

JavaScript is an awesome way to start too :)

W3Schools Online Web Tutorials

And don't stop believing in yourself hey.

I know it is hard to want to fit in at your age. :)
 
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