So far the story is great, but, characters... Golem's are far more original, but Ryle, his parents got killed, he wants revenge, now he wants to save someone... Not the same, but similar to Lish... Rumil basically has no personality, very little, yet she seems to be very important. Somehow she looks like typical damsel in distress character (you'll see why) tho she manages to stand out from that. Other characters are a bit generic, but the Evils in the story might not be so evil, and is that transsexual demon? lol Also pedophilia? Who know how many years old demon falling in love with a 12 year old girl? Well it's funny and kind of awesome as it is not meant to be that way. So if this keeps up this way I'll probably rate it 5 stars...