help with class project! Laundry/Pub???

[TxGoat]

^ That's a winning idea. Imagine if all businesses started out like this, an idea spawned from the depths of the lounge. ;D

spawned from the depth of the lounge, which in turn spawned out of the dark places in the minds of AF members?!?! BE AFRAID, BE VERY AFRAID!!

 

[danaj]

So guys, here is a commercial I made for this project. Please give me some feedback. This is due on Wed, so if I need any improvements I need to know now. The commercial is just supplemental to our business plan, which I think is pretty solid.
clean spirits commercial 0001 - YouTube

 

[Seanette]

Hey guys. I am taking a small business course, and I need some help. We are supposed to come up with a business, and present a business plan. The business my group and I choose is called "Suds and Duds" and it is a laundry mat combined with a bar....We live near the University of Arizona, so I am hoping it will appeal to the college crowd. So would you guys use something like this, or would you have in college? We plan on serving coffee in the daytime, having wifi, and serving alcohol in the evening. So you aren't so bored when washing your clothes. Let me know what you guys think, also I am not sold on the name, any suggestions?

I'd personally avoid the place, since I have a distaste for dealing with drunks if I can't avoid it.

 

[mpw]

...So would you guys use something like this, or would you have in college? We plan on serving coffee in the daytime... ...also I am not sold on the name, any suggestions?

Laundry combined with coffee shop for students? It's a shame you're not at college in Amsterdam, you could've gone with 'Soap & Dope'

"Is there a 'delicates' setting on this drier?"

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[BabyBlues]

So guys, here is a commercial I made for this project. Please give me some feedback. This is due on Wed, so if I need any improvements I need to know now. The commercial is just supplemental to our business plan, which I think is pretty solid.
clean spirits commercial 0001 - YouTube

My $.02 is that the words in the second half 'Free Wifi' and the ones after that need to either have a shadow so they don't blend in as much or moved. Otherwise I like it.

 

[danaj]

My $.02 is that the words in the second half 'Free Wifi' and the ones after that need to either have a shadow so they don't blend in as much or moved. Otherwise I like it.

I will try to figure out how to do that. I am heading home now to work on it.