@Milo Willamson, I've pointed out before the need to use a spell-checker, and also to use correct grammar. But from the following snippet...it doesn't look like you're doing either.
"Escaping our own witnessing in these small children, as they lay out of
each,
covenionations behind another trouble, looking outwards and
knoing how much it is, a strange
gahtering over,
annoucing outwards and resounding there, it was a mania problem,
they knew it was ever escaping in these houses, a
manical troubleing in these
type writer, behind another murderous range, it felt more
then a lower
draw bridge."
I've only addressed the spelling errors [they're underlined]; the grammar is a whole other issue. Just the fact that that's one long, drawn-out paragraph is problematical.
Please know that I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but beating around the bush won't accomplish anything. We need to know what our mistakes are in order to correct them.